Cold Turkey Page 14

This piece right here is very inspiring! Even for a vore fan such as myself! I have never seen a single page of a vore comic, let alone an entire comic, attempt to create and simulate the details of what it would be like to be eaten up alive by a teenager inside alongside her sandwich. Very few vore comics ever did achieve that amount of detail and on top of that capture the absolute horror of what it's like to be accidentally chewed by after being shrunken down to the size of a tiny mouse!

Not only does it feel like an erotic vore comic book, but it also feels like watching a very entertaining, ableit surreal, horror film! You did an amazing job on this page alone and lemme get to the details as to why:

-The sense of confusion that the first few panels gave me were annoying at first, since it was hard to tell what part of Vale's mouth was exacly Prudence was in, but after a while I knew by the look of the rest of the panels that you were intetionally trying to capture that confusion you would have had the reader ended up un a similar situation in real life; your comment that you left behind confirmed that, which only makes me feel prouder of you even more!

-The sense of fear and innocence that Prudence has while she was being eaten just adds to the eerie, confusing and terrible nature of being eaten, and all the more reasons why I love macro vore art in gerneral!

-The Shading! Oh my gosh the Shading! As some who also draws in black and white I can tell you that your shading skills are way out of my league! It really captures that darkness you would most obviously feel when you would be inside a giant and chewing human mouth!

Overall You did an amazing job! However I left only 3 1/2 stars because of your somewhat sloppy line art. Its not BAD but I wish your characters, especially when drawn in b&w line art, could have looked a little distinct from each other, since the majority of them hardly stand out from each other; this of course is different from your colored work. But you know you have a problem drawing characters when you can hardly distinguish their black and white counterparts. Try experimenting with new & bizarre hairstyles (Example: anime hair) accessories like earrings, bracelets, jackets, ect.;Make sure they stand out otherwise your characters may end up all same-ey.